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Ode to a Loving Father
Contributed by
Sushila
on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 08:23:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Across the seas he came,
To a land without fame.
Children to the number of seven,
Was his gift from heaven.
Toil and trouble over the years,
He slogged with his soulmate in tears.
The time came for her to rest,
Alone he was left to face the test.
Heart overflowing with love on its brim,
He raised his children with a grim.
One by one they soared to heights,
To proudly put his name in sights.
Then came the day of his call,
From the heaven that stood him tall.
The number of seven that was his,
Bade him a farewell of thanks with a kiss.
Copyright ©
Sushila
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2010-07-30 08:23:46]
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Re: Ode to a Loving Father
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by ammar on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 08:41:54 AM AEST
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You sum up his life beautifully.
A wonderful ode, worth reading repeatedly.
Peace
Ammar |
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Re: Ode to a Loving Father
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 03:54:39 AM AEST
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| a truely wonderful poem about an obviously wonderful person, very well done and thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Ode to a Loving Father
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by yvonxsmeets on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 02:35:36 PM AEST
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very beuatiful poem.
he will be proud |
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Re: Ode to a Loving Father
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by yvonxsmeets on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 02:35:37 PM AEST
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very beuatiful poem.
he will be proud |
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