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a silent scream
Contributed by
carebear_baby_1988
on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 02:44:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A scream in the distance
a sudden plea for help
by a young girl touched by unwanted hands
as tears stream down her cheeks
just wondering if she will live through this unbearable agony
or if they shall choose to kill her
after using her like some rag doll
with no emotions to be shown
and leave her unstitched body
that lies so helpless
to be found
by some stranger
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Re: a silent scream
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by reprobate on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 03:17:14 AM AEST
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a truly terrible thought
hope it is fiction
thanks for sharing... |
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Re: a silent scream
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by Sushila on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 08:16:49 AM AEST
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| well writen words express the depth of the silent suffering. keep up the good writing. |
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Re: a silent scream
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Friday, 17th September 2010 @ 11:30:31 AM AEST
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| WOW! This gave me chills! I too hope this is fiction. GREAT JOB! |
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Re: a silent scream
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by SunshineySam on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 10:27:16 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this. It's good to make your voice known, you have to power to write about this and have raw emotions. Stay strong and make your voice known. |
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