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Not my fault for your leave
Contributed by
maygee
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 04:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You can try to blame me for you leaving but it isn't clever,
considering you were to the one who said "together forever"
I did everything in my power to stop you going.
You said I'd be fine but here I am, tears overflowing.
I was the one saying we could work it out,
you said the words "it's better if we don't" with doubt.
I tried so hard but you're the one who easily tore us apart,
you're the one who left this scar on my heart.
Here I am writing another typical poem like usual,
but this time hoping this will be your wake up call
because I really can't change what you did or what you do
and I really can't change the fact that I still love you.
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Re: Not my fault for your leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 01:33:18 AM AEST (User
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I really don't see many relationships lasting these days and yours, in this poem, is just another. Well expressed.
All the best, Chris. |
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