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If Alone
Contributed by
Paddy
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:16:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Where is the light when alone down a hole?
Who brightens the darkness when sadness smothers you whole
I have no answer; each one instilled from inside,
Challenge your thoughts and you have nowhere to hide
Don’t give up easy, there is someone there,
You are the master of all your thoughts and cares
A stranger, family or friend can help you out too.
If life’s been a challenge, be proud of what you’ve come through,
You are not an island; the world is close to you,
Just wave out to us and we’ll wave too.
Copyright ©
Paddy
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2010-07-29 13:16:11]
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Re: If Alone
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by Sushila on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 08:46:10 AM AEST
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| Well written words of encouragement that extend an hand to anyone in despair. Well done on a good piece of work. |
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Re: If Alone
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by fuzzler on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:29:02 PM AEST
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| Sweet words. I extend my hand in a wave to you. |
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Re: If Alone
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by colt540 on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 05:25:29 PM AEST
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| Bravo for this is quite a poem, but is easy and the wording could have been different. for half way through i had lost some interest in it to tell you the truth. so other then these things good job. |
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