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A mask
Contributed by
Paddy
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 07:00:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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As I indwell in thought of this world's meaning,
There is no answer but inside I am screaming.
Why do we ponder with masks on as we dance?
I’m a culprit at times; to change, help a world’s trance.
I don’t mean to be gloomy, but give it a thought.
A child’s life, more simple, more honest, ours’ not
So with any mask off, you will feel even more free,
And see straight inside whether it, you or me.
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Re: A mask
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by omarzz on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:28:45 PM AEST
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| good write and surely a thought to ponder |
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Re: A mask
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 06:12:11 AM AEST
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| Very thoughtful write,great depth of sensitivity and open honest reflection, love the line A child's life more simple more honest, ours not, maybe as adults we make things more complicated than they need to be. |
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Re: A mask
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 05:04:06 PM AEST
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just thought-provoking. thanx for this, i enjoyed it
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: A mask
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 07:14:15 AM AEST
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Just a thought, but excellent and insightful in its articulation. The accumulation of facade after facade through life definately hinders true understanding.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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