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WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
Contributed by
chrisdavid
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:31:38 AM in AEST
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I can't understand why we're all the same
What do we get from causing pain?
Is it the bond we have, that special kind?
That makes us use the words we couldn't normally find
I guess it's what we feel, sometimes we're over keen
That makes us say the things that we don't really mean
The words we use cuts through like a knife
Sometimes we can never repair a broken life
Some will forgive and forget
Some will forget it all
But others will put up their defences
And watch as you fall
Saying 'Sorry' just won't work now
Crying is not the key
Your only way is to plead
And hope for sympathy
Why do we hurt the ones we love?
We hurt the soul inside
Please tell me why?
Why do we hurt the ones we love?
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Re: WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
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by Daniellemarie on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:53:53 AM AEST
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| really like this poem it's so true but I dont think we mean to hurt the ones we love its happens sometimes with out control. |
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Re: WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:11:23 AM AEST
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this is very good. your words ring with truth,
very well writen. |
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Re: WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:24:43 AM AEST
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Very well-written. Your words speak volumes about how words can inflict pain.
Great poem!
Heidi |
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Re: WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
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by 12161216 on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 02:09:40 AM AEST
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| very well written good job |
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Re: WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
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by Manic on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 04:07:12 AM AEST
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| awesome i loved it! |
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Re: WHY DO WE HURT THE ONES WE LOVE?
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 06:00:50 AM AEST
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| Great poem about a subject that most can relate to. The tongue is razor sharp and sometimes the wounds caused by it reopen after healing, so through this kind of writing it can challenge us all as to how we use our words and how much responsibility we have. well expressed |
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