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Kissing Black Daisies
Contributed by
12161216
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:19:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We'll kiss black daises white,
And share secrets during night,
We braid our sadness into a chain,
And throw away all the pain,
Hugh each other when we cry,
Because we'll be there for every smile and sigh,
Sit together in the happy glow,
Of starting anew, of letting go,
And whisper of tears and kissea nd lies,
Stay with each other through our darkest times,
Blow away horror and despair,
And turn them to bubbles we pop in the air,
We smile together and touch our toes,
Sneeze sparkles and together we'll show,
Each other the inside of our mind,
Suck away the sadness that we find,
And then we'll hold each other,
Cuz' when I'm with you I'm not scared,
Twila
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Re: Kissing Black Daisies
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by elle on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:46:36 AM AEST
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This poem is so sweet & full of delightful sentiment. It's appeal & charm, atleast for me,
lies exactly in the we's & our's. Two souls sharing this wonderful dimension we call life.
It's so real. I love the line
" We braid our sadness into a chain,
And throw away all the pain."
Nicely done. elle :) |
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Re: Kissing Black Daisies
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:30:26 AM AEST
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Magical imagery in this ultimate friendship poem. You are very lucky to have a friendship as strong as this one. I could visualize this poem well. Great job!
Heidi |
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