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a bridge
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 12:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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carving great slashes in the world
one into the other
the correct where and when
best kept to myself
stars and empty space
the long fall
ends.
ming, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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ming
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Re: a bridge
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 12:46:17 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this, it touches something inside, well writen, well done. |
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Re: a bridge
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:39:00 AM AEST
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Dearest ming, dear abstract queen,
How I've missed you static glow. . . a presence exerted by a motionless abundance.
I bow, lest I fall. I contemplate & then savor the delicious words, the lush meaning, of which your thoughts are tempered.
As I'm often want to do, I've read you poem line for line backwards & forwards. I find the exhilirating pull of meaning & buoyancy in either direction.
This always symbolizes to me an astute & delicate quality of sacredness hidden in the aura of the poet & in the aurora of the words An enchantment awaits.
Here's to your words! elle :) |
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