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I wanna be like you
Contributed by
BlackLightsBurn
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 10:17:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wanna be with you
Your alleviating voice cures my every waking ache
This ache wont seem to go without you
The touch of your skin vanquishes these blisters deep within my heart
This heart wont seem to pulsate without you
You told me you loved me once
Yet Leaving me to cry because I know you don't love me
I know I cant be with you
But please be with me
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Re: I wanna be like you
(User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:43:23 AM AEST
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| It sounds to me that you're struggling to get over this person. |
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Re: I wanna be like you
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:53:34 AM AEST
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Very well-written and full of emotion. Short but extremely powerful
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