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Final Shot
Contributed by
daledo420
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 08:40:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This is my final attempt at true love
I have put it all out there hanging about
my heart can take this again after this im out
To say that this is hard is putting it lightly
i have never met someone who treated me so kindly
to feel your soft touch up against my skin
is exctasy to me not sure where to begin
we started as friends avoiding the fact
that we had a undeniable chemistry and not an act
I wish this was a game for me but unfortunately not
I have completely changed from cold to hot
so once again this is my final shot
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Re: Final Shot
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mila on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 11:57:25 PM AEST (User
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defently could relate to this....i like the way u wrote this piece! |
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