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effervescent veil.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 07:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The smile of piercing ears is upon your effervescent veil.
Statues in the shade of eastern beginnings
Now sets in westerns yearning for rest.
Dreams of that day will inevitably replay moments of that unforgettable day.
When we help hands on that slippery rock
While the creek washed our souls from bottom to top.
Basking in its clouded reflection,
With time far from allowed.
And our love shouting loud.
“I love you”
“I love you”
*pinch poke, you owe me a coke*
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andrewjones12
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2010-07-27 07:51:42]
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Re: effervescent veil.
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 12:59:09 AM AEST
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| Once again a lovely piece of writing. You express yourself so well with well chosen words, well done Andrew, more please. |
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Re: effervescent veil.
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 09:34:28 AM AEST
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ENCORE! ENCORE! ENCORE! The difference between white and black.........what a wonderful contrast is that! Pronounced which makes it really stick out! Like a lovely Opera.
Tantilizing, mezmerizing, to the depths, and then the last minute is brought back to tease, and please!
What creativity!
Warm love
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Re: effervescent veil.
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by The_Writing_Master on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 02:52:17 PM AEST
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beautiful my friend! Just as always! You chose your words so carefully, and that stuck out to me. Best of luck to you my friend.
-Matthew |
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