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puzzles
Contributed by
wil_ca
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Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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a puzzle that starts with the lie of one piece
I feel the rush when two are entertwined
the more I invest, the more it grows
the more time I spend, the more the addiction sows its seed
I dont wish to marvel at the finished picture
I just wish to connect the pieces
and I will never stop putting them together
and I will never stop to view my broken relationships
or love i left for my pieces and puzzles
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Re: puzzles
(User Rating: 1 )
by Obnoxious_Bread on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 10:36:46 AM AEST
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| Interesting write, really conveys feelings of fulfillment but desire to keep on going at the same time, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: puzzles
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by yvonxsmeets on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 01:10:41 PM AEST
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it's shows the will of going on
good writing |
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