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Him
Contributed by
chlois
on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 01:49:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When i hear his icy wind chime voice, my heart melts like molted rock.
His warm skin, soft under my touch, calling for me to unravel his secrets.
Subjecting my body to his undeniably irresistable attraction.
Corressing his smooth skin, wrapping my hands around his arms, whispering to his eyes.
Telling him what i need, sharing my desires.
With one simple suggestion, my deepest fears of committment are faced without obstacle.
chlois, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE by reading and commenting on at least 3 poems by other members for each one you submit.
As of this note, you have 17 posted poems and only 6 interactive comments. BEFORE posting another poem, please, at the very least, bring up your comment to poem ratio to 1:1. Thank you.
Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.
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2010-07-26 13:49:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Him
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:45:10 AM AEST (User
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My favorite part: "whispering to his eyes" simple yet complex in description. Love it.
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