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My Finale
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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standing at the end of the road
with darkness all around
standing at the edge of life
my feet not on the ground
jumping off this cliff of life
don't care how far i fall
smiling as i hurtle down
just want to end it all
leaving your dead world behind
leaving all the pain behind
leaving everything behind
standing here in front of all of you
dying on this ***** stage
reading this morbid tale to your
turning the final page
beating this reality
into your ***** head
teaching you to not fear death
for, you are already dead
taking all these sleeping pills
yet, i am still awake
running from the demons inside
whom i just cannot shake
wishing that i weren't alone
needing one final ear
to share these final words, before
i am swallowed by the darkness i held so dear
fearing that all was for naught
knowing i'll never reach the stars
assured now that my entire life
was an endless road of scars
bidding farewell to the few i loved
flipping off those i loathed
my final breath, a sigh of resignation
now, finally, i'm going home
walking off the end of this road
with darkness all around
floating beyond the edge of life
my feet not on the ground
jumped off this wretched cliff of life
had no idea how far i would fall
smiling as my life bleeds out
finally ended it all
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Cancer
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2003-04-17 05:05:00]
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Re: My Finale
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by Kane on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:27:02 AM AEST
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Very strong awsome write. I write dark poetry myself and I can tell you , you have one great talent. Great write. Keep it up.
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Re: My Finale
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:41:30 PM AEST
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This is so strong and full of sadness. You have a friend here!! Great write
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Re: My Finale
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 11:57:23 PM AEST
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fearing that all was for naught
knowing i'll never reach the stars
assured now that my entire life
was an endless road of scars
Wow those 4 lines as well as the whole 4th stanza really grabbed me. This was intense and painfully sad. I hope you don't feel like this buddy.
Peace,
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Re: My Finale
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 02:52:09 PM AEST
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Awesome write, so powerful and painfully gripping. I loved the emotion in this, and i know how you feel! Keep up the good writing!
Lisa |
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