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Divine Creature
Contributed by
xfaggotx
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Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 01:46:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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tangled vines, grow in her mind
twisted and snapped over time
creating visions, distorted once loved
her dearest moments all destroyed
her body lies stillborn
with melancholy struck upon her face
the precious roots of memory begin lifting
forced to lose every trace
she slowly drifts absent
as the world starts to darken
she wonders if she's said too much
not every emotion must be spoken
somehow she is awoken
from the familiar beating of his heart
and somehow her body is warmed
by the fervor in his eyes
and burning with each tear
she feels his life
the tangled vines all aflame
she's tenderly scolded by his soul
burning so brilliantly
she wonders how she could've let him go
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Re: Divine Creature
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 03:11:15 AM AEST
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For not writing a poem for five years, this is really good. :) I hope you keep writing.
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Re: Divine Creature
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:10:09 AM AEST
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| this is wonderful. well writen with words that flow off the page. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Divine Creature
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by fuzzler on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 01:00:31 AM AEST
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| Don't you dare wait another five years, a true talent. |
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