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Turned On
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:17:06 AM in AEST
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Am I naughty for my cheeky thoughts,as I read your mind at play
Would you paint me as a dirty "she" just because I slide your way
I will not refrain from delicious licks,nor could I read the other side
As I reach in closer to take you in,your every word,a virgin's guide
I learn within the silence,you sometimes do not know I'm there
Just perusing all you give to those,who give and take their share
Swallowed whole by your intellect,taken in by your fresh mind
Like a dive into the great unknown,never knowing what I'll find
Thank you for the stimulation,for the adjustment of my thighs
My butts planted on this chair,and it's becoming much more wise
Do not blush or turn away,just read this and surely know
You turn me on,you turn me loose,you allow my "self" to grow
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lovingwhispers
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2010-07-26 00:17:06]
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Re: Turned On
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:24:27 AM AEST
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P.S. The "note" was supposed to say...
This is not sexual...simply a write about being turned on by someones mind :) |
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Re: Turned On
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by spud on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 05:27:12 AM AEST
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Hi LW
No .... of course it's not sexual(???)
Personality, body, mind - it's whatever 'turns you
on', is it not? And this well-scripted provocative
piece of poetry proves that the mind is as alluring
as all the other bits and pieces.
Nice one!
Tommy
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Re: Turned On
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by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 07:25:27 AM AEST
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"As I reach in closer to take you in,your every word,a virgin's guide"
magnificant! i loved this one LW your metaphor of attraction lead me on. you used a typical phrases of lust and used them as longing for knowlege, enlightenment of the others mind. clever as it was, it was also very appealing, as you are turned on by the attraction of a certains mind, i was attracted to this poem.
very well done.
-andrew.
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Re: Turned On
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:24:50 AM AEST
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turned on indeed!! this is a very nice piece of writing, I love the subject matter and your total
expression of that subject is brilliant. well done. |
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Re: Turned On
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:14:02 AM AEST
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It is certainly a very cheeky little write, and I can imagine the devilish grin on your face as you were writing it.
Made my day pass with a smile, so thanks for that.
Steve |
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Re: Turned On
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by Applethoughtrotten on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:31:35 PM AEST
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| Very good. Well writen with just enough metaphores to keep everyone happy.....Write On...Apple |
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Re: Turned On
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 07:46:04 PM AEST
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| there's a certain tone in your wording :P I enjoyed this |
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Re: Turned On
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by fuzzler on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 12:52:27 AM AEST
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| Reading this was like looking at the Mona Lisa's smile.... Is it for me? Athough i know it's not. THANKYOU> |
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