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What is it You Want?
Contributed by
GeorgeKoleris
on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 06:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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There is a voice in your head
It tells you to go to sleep
Unfortunately your mind is sinking
A few feet to deep
Thoughts are pressing you down
Like a thunder cloud,
Damp and thick, impossible to get through
What is it you want?
Revenge, revenge for what has happened
The past is in your way,
But it does not define you
The way they think it does
It does surround you
The way they think it does
You try to get away
But you fail each time
You try to be someone else
And then you die
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Re: What is it You Want?
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by boredtrucker on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 07:21:15 PM AEST
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pretty good difficult to under stand if u havnt been there but thats most peotry aint it?
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Re: What is it You Want?
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:59:10 AM AEST
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| Pretty emotional stuff. |
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Re: What is it You Want?
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by spud on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 05:37:41 AM AEST
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Hi,
Nicely written. Hang in there, my friend. It's how
much or how little we enhance the lives of those
we love that defines us.
Tommy
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Re: What is it You Want?
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by northernlights on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 07:04:36 AM AEST
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| If there is one think i've learned that however difficult life becomes you cannot help but be yourself but you can reach out to people who will accept you for who you are even if its not always easy to find them, difficult but brave write x |
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