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Timeless Beauty
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 03:01:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Golden fades through shivering trees,withdrawing from the earth
Winter's kiss has touched upon,where usually there is birth
Evening calls much earlier,and as days' end steals away the light
I gaze upon timeless beauty,as she undresses for the night
Draped in velvet of sapphire,shimmering diamonds in her eyes
So gently she moves within winter's breath,and stirs the night to rise
Mountain mist has filled the valleys,and a glistening veil of dew
Dances on emerald carpet,as she watches with love anew
Critters of the shadows,come forth to greet her as she sings
Others in their slumber,dream of the all the gifts she brings
Deep within her embrace,there is a tender,calming warmth
And if you will allow her,she will hold you through life's storms
Cast your eyes upon the heavens as she undresses for the night
Allow her to envelop you,as she gently fades away the light
As not only in her golden hours,does she hold a special place
For when the night comes calling,she will show her timeless grace
Golden fades through shivering trees,withdrawing from the earth
Winter's kiss has touched upon,where usually there is birth
Evening calls much earlier,and as days' end steals away the light
Gaze upon her loveliness,as she undresses for the night
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Re: Timeless Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 03:21:36 AM AEST
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| You're a proficient poet, I really like this poem and the line about the day undressing for the night. Woah |
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Re: Timeless Beauty
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by spud on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 06:43:26 AM AEST
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Hi LW,
Exquisite!!
Which line did I like best?? All of them!!
I'm pleased it's still the early afternoon for me,
because if I had read this poem in the late evening
it would have gently lulled me into sleep with its
soft engaging musical tones and its profound
persuasive message that ''all is well in the world.''
Beautiful!
Tommy
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Re: Timeless Beauty
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 07:05:26 AM AEST
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| A poem you can sink into with its soft tones and reflections first two lines perfectly poetic and I like the repetition, love the ending! altogether reflecting the way the beauty of Nature melts the heart, lovely write |
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Re: Timeless Beauty
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 12:47:22 PM AEST
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| This is wonderful!! I am sat here with a glass of wine reading your super words. I am totally relaxed in the glow of your words, thank you so much for sharing this. |
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Re: Timeless Beauty
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 09:07:58 PM AEST
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This write is a timeless beauty.
Beautiful..
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Timeless Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 07:49:08 PM AEST
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| This is one of my favourite poems, i mean period. i might have to print it and put it on my wall. |
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