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Bleed the Truth
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 10:16:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Marry into a troubled youth
suspend belief with eighty proof
The space between fact and logic
is balled up nerves of nostalgic
Divorce the truth using any means
serve up something juicy, feed the fiends
The straight and narrow is plagued by curves
avoidance is key when making swerves
Life mimics itself time and again
challenges arise; making mice of men
When does reality blur to obscure?
Without the dis-ease there can't be a cure
Death cloaks its intents to the harmless prey
dealing miracles, leading them astray
Surpassing all but the truth inclined
help for them has been declined.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2010-07-24 10:16:15]
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Re: Bleed the Truth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 11:51:28 AM AEST
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In answer to your author's note, no, this is just a bad dream you have awoken from. Go back to sleep and it'll be okay in the morning.
Really, though, many seem to be M.I.A. just like a certain PerfectoScorp I know; .a lot of them facebooking now.
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This is one of those poems that I can read and then read again getting different interpretation fed into my ol' cranium. Nice to see one of your poems again. (well two but I have to come back later to comment on the udder one).
Take care,
ulTIMate
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Re: Bleed the Truth
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:18:03 AM AEST
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Well it certainly seems that time away hasn't blunted the poetic mind and switched off the tap of creative.
Nice work again.
Steve |
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Re: Bleed the Truth
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by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 30th October 2012 @ 09:39:51 PM AEST
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An intelligent piece of work with attiude. Thx
TT |
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Re: Bleed the Truth
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 07:49:53 PM AEST
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what an intriguing poem, it is full of wisdom and
logic for everyone, each stanza holds up on its
own, beautifully penned, a delightful read for sure:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Bleed the Truth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 02:29:23 AM AEST
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Without the dis-ease there can't be a cure I like what you said there. That's true!
I read my original comment, so with that, I got a poem on alcoholism tonight. Wonder what I'd get in another few years....hmmmm.
Thankies for an interesting read ol' wise one.
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Re: Bleed the Truth
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 5th October 2020 @ 02:00:48 AM AEST
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I really dug this like a grave digger...🆗😄😅
Seriously this scorptastic you little vixen.🐈🐈🐈🐈🐱 |
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