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the sea
Contributed by
reubenrich
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Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 06:30:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the sea:
the sea, bewitching and honest,
pleades for me to stay on the shore.
i stand in its wake, daring to go forth.
its brooding currents beneath me roar.
when her waves flood the sand,
i beg that they wash me out with them.
a sanctury of blue and turquoise condemn,
to meloncoly, this dream to end.
keep beloved,
flickering endured.
tears regret,
lest allured.
i lay drowned by the very grace that awoke me,
a maelstrom of shelter and solace.
learned raven circles love's descent to madness.
silence is shattered when her rolling thunder breakes,
do not weep thou says to me.
grieve no more for i shall set you free.
alas, i wake from lumber dream, reality, and no sea.
Copyright ©
reubenrich
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2010-07-24 06:30:14]
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Re: the sea
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 08:15:10 AM AEST
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Re: the sea
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 09:57:59 AM AEST
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| Your clever wording stirs up some vivid imagery. The typos do it a small disservice, but this was still an enjoyable read. Well done. |
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Re: the sea
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by Applethoughtrotten on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 11:52:41 AM AEST
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| Having grown up within a stones throw of the mighty Chesapeake Bay I relived memories that have always pulled upon my heartstrings. Thank You.....Apple |
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