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The World Followed You
Contributed by
sodapopsuicide
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Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I still remember what you said to me,
That warm spring day,
Sitting together in the alley.
You told me everything would be ok.
"Don't cry," you said.
"I'm here now."
But the next day you left.
I felt so alone as I watched you turn away.
With your black curly hair and blonde streaks.
Your jacket that I loved so much to wear,
On those cold winter days.
Now I'm left with nothing,
But this note I hold and these tears,
Running slowly down my face.
Remember that star-shaped bracelet you gave me?
"You'll always be a star in my heart," you said.
But then you left,
And with you went the world.
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2003-04-17 03:35:00]
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Re: The World Followed You
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:54:05 AM AEST
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Gotta love those people that turn their back on you just after they manage to become your world. Great write. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: The World Followed You
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by psyonara on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:55:23 AM AEST
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| very good poem... quite sad though. i've been in a similar situation, altho not quite the same. well written. Helmut :+> |
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Re: The World Followed You
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by ThirtyDays on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:01:39 PM AEST
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To feel or told u are needed, and then discarded is a terrible thing to endure..
sometimes the other person goes from "victim" to "perpetrator'" and we don't see it until it's too late... just as u think u have figured them out.. they change so dramatically than you can but think u were part of their master plan all along..
hang tuff.. u learned a valuable lesson.. as i try to say.. don't think about it.. but don't forget it.
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