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wishing i did
Contributed by
jey
on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 05:16:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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wishing i did
tell you how i felt
how still
i think of you
wishing i did
kiss you
hold you
like in my dreams
wishing i did
before it was too late
before you were gone
give you a clue
wishing i knew
if you felt the same way
if you wanted to tell me
how you felt too
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2010-07-23 17:16:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: wishing i did
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 10:00:25 AM AEST (User
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The format really sets the feel and the flow of words/emotion. Nicely done. |
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