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Heart on sleeve
Contributed by
quadira
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Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 02:19:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Heart on sleeve
Empty pain, forgotten gain, constant rain,
Fretful tears, mishandled years, darkened fears
Weakened soul, unending hole, empty bowl
Then………
Ray of light, find some fight, hold on tight
Give a bit, start to fit, let go of it
Open eyes, joyful cries, sadness dies
Then……..
Heart on sleeve, I believe, relax and breath
Making plans, holding hands, wedding bands
Giving all, standing tall, feeling sure
Then……..
Cracks appear, down a gear, familiar fear
Feared day, slipping away, please stay
Unearthed lies, last goodbyes, cutting ties
Then……..
Old skin, nightmares begin, lights dim
Same old, no one to hold, growing cold
Faded dreams, ripped seams, sadness beams
Then……..
Flicker of light, in sight, hold tight
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quadira
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2010-07-23 14:19:30]
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Re: Heart on sleeve
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 02:44:38 PM AEST
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Wow this is a fantastic, creative mystical write.
Great job.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Heart on sleeve
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by northernlights on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:24:34 PM AEST
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| Cleverly created roller coaster great rhythm and feel to this emphasising the theme in the best way it can be emphasised well written |
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Re: Heart on sleeve
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by gypsydancer69 on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 05:16:48 AM AEST
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| awesome sounds like u better hold on tight, to this one comein on flight |
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Re: Heart on sleeve
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:23:26 AM AEST
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The peaks and troughs of life illustrated for all to see here.
I like the way you handled this.
Steve |
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