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The Beginning
Contributed by
applethoughtrotten
on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:00:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Scattered quacking,
rolls of thunder,
magnets shaking,
earths big wonder.
Volcanos aching
clouds of ash.
Tsunami making
all beaches clash.
Ozone leaving,
a solar flash,
planet heating,
Gods mighty wrath.
Wars emerging
day and night.
Oil resurging,
endless in sight.
Foods depleting,
No jobs abound,
Water's needed,
though nowhere found....
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Re: The Beginning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zeberdee on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:03:37 AM AEST
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| I like the apolalyptic theme. Very well written with its few but precise words. |
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Re: The Beginning
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 09:07:07 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: The Beginning
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by gr8tfulldead on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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| haha awesome i loved it and soooooo true nice call |
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