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meaningless significants.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 08:34:23 AM in AEST
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It’s funny to think that my shoes are more significant to my life than you.
The way I feel only dictates my actions.
My actions only dictate my appeal.
So why is it I care so much for you?
When it is so easy to compare you
To a pair of shoes?
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Re: meaningless significants.
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by kd7cnz on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:41:05 AM AEST
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| The beauty of simplicity. I enjoyed it |
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Re: meaningless significants.
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 09:09:31 AM AEST
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| very interesting |
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Re: meaningless significants.
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 10:37:40 PM AEST
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I love the undertones of sarcasm and definately enjoyed how you say so much with so few words.
I couldn't if I tried lol...always I end up with a thousand lines.So yeah...no Haiku for me ;)
Bravo!!
Blessings
LW |
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Re: meaningless significants.
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:12:21 AM AEST
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You amaze me Andrew, but on this one you missed the real point!*smiles*
It depends on the shoes, Andrew......are they comfy, or do they cramp?
I've had shoes I couldn't go a day without,
and others that wore blisters on my toes!
I've had others that were so comfy, they'd remove all my woes!
Loved it Andrew..........but tell me please
Which kind of shoes are you speaking about,
are they worn with ease?*smiles* |
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Re: meaningless significants.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 07:38:19 PM AEST
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| very little writing, a great deal of emotion. I enjoyed it. |
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