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Contributed by
itsuhhme
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Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 07:45:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like a warmth coming from with in
from the depths of which you’ve never known
Bombarding you in every which way
Lasting as though its eternal light
Such a familiar emotion
That runs through these veins
One that you know for certain
Yet it makes you pander if it could really be
As peaceful as the pacific breeze
Spontaneous like the weather itself
Just like the storm no one saw coming
It strikes fear with in the soul as it cast the first sign
Shaken like a foreign plague overwhelming us all
The unbearable ignorance leaving you lost in thought
As only time leaving in you the presents of a burning hell
You lay silent sorting out any commotion leading to any possible sign
The final blow comes like a freight train dead ahead
With every ounce you fight it comes back doubled in size
Left lying there in the silence of lonesome
With nothing left but the hope of what once was
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Re: late
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 08:10:47 AM AEST
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very nice, well writtin.
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Re: late
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 10:11:37 AM AEST
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