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construction workers whistling on lunch break.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 08:14:32 AM in AEST
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Displays features prominently .
Because wondering eyes boost self-esteem.
But wanting eyes to wonder.
Is to easily seen.
-short skirted women.
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Re: construction workers whistling on lunch break.
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 11:14:24 AM AEST
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Well, this one was certainly different, Andrew. I had expected a poem about "Happy Workers" and was going to comment like
Busy Hands are Happy hands! But then I was taken aback. Woman shouldn't wear short skirts, but when they do,,,,,,,Busy Eyes are looking at you, and they are Happy Eyes too!*smiles*
It's a good sign Andrew......you're still alive too!
Warm love
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Re: construction workers whistling on lunch break.
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 12:38:56 PM AEST
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| well done, the topic is light heated and so well constructed, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: construction workers whistling on lunch break.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 01:07:11 PM AEST
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh good write.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: construction workers whistling on lunch break.
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by DrcGaimer on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 01:45:06 PM AEST
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| I haven't seen a poem which used so little words, yet make such a huge and bold statement in a while. I loved the twist. I expected the poem to focus on the workers, but you centered on the woman and the reason for her actions. Very creative and powerful. That's right brother, put the ball in her court. |
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Re: construction workers whistling on lunch break.
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by dogsruleruby on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 11:00:58 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
I like it. (: |
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Re: construction workers whistling on lunch break.
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by cetblue on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:42:50 PM AEST
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| Certainly intriguing. Short and sweet. Keep writing :) |
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