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Falling
Contributed by
sodapopsuicide
on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Have you ever been in love?
I was in love.
I was floating,
then flying, soaring!
But then time stopped,
And now I'm spinning.
I feel dizzy.
I'm falling,
Faster,
Faster.
I've hit the ground.
And there's no one here to pick me up.
My eyes are flooding.
My knees are weak.
It's dark,
I can't see.
What happened to me?
What happened to US?
I thought you loved me.
I thought today would be perfect.
And now I'm ruined.
Copyright ©
sodapopsuicide
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2003-04-17 02:25:00]
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Re: Falling
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by Sara on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:07:17 PM AEST
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wow.... i'm an official fan! I can't believe no one commented on this...!! I loved it! Great work again!!
<3 Sara |
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Re: Falling
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by Kirby on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:54:59 PM AEST
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I am a fan of yours now to obecause you tell it how it is and know what to say to get your point aross! I'm sorry that you had to go through this like all of us do! This was a great poem! Love:::Kirby
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Re: Falling
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by Jaima on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:27:45 PM AEST
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| i've had that feeling too..you've sumed it up perfectly...well done..*smiles* |
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