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take a stand
Contributed by
jordanarce17
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Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 12:32:19 PM in AEST
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you and i being pushed down with physical and emotional scars.
are tears go down are faces like rain.
well it stops today with a bang.
you and i being pushed down no more.
are tears go down no more.
time to take a stand.
the tears change into courage.
the scars change into hope.
time to take a stand.
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Re: take a stand
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 09:43:39 PM AEST
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Bravo!
That is the right philosophy. Take a stand !
Who wants tears when you can shine in the glory of courage! instead of whining?
Bravo friend!
Great job! - let it be infectious
Elizabeth |
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Re: take a stand
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 07:47:01 AM AEST
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wonderful! i dig your stlye. more more more please.
-andrew |
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Re: take a stand
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by M-LOU on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 05:14:36 PM AEST
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There is always hope. I am in the process of taking a stand. Great expression of moving in a positive direction.
Thanks,
M-LOU |
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Re: take a stand
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by DesolantDreamer on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 06:53:30 PM AEST
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| A great concept, your structure and grammar needs improvement but it's still a wonderful idea. It gets the point across. =D |
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