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friends in life
Contributed by
spooky
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Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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sadness follows as the journey begins,,
gray clouds race across the skies,,,
picture perfect , of the way it was before,,
the last leaf drops as the winds subsides,,
sunrise's slowly rise's,,
time's off to slow start,,
looking outside to see the skie's,,
is it going to be blue, or gray as usuall,,
work all day, time slips away,,
blue as the skie's, gray as the clouds,,
wondering if the gray will leave,,
hopeing one day,.,for the blue skies to stay,,
writting in the sand,,
hopeing someone will read it,,
lost in the winds forever,,
the words are washed away,,
gone but never forgotten,,
words of wisdom will show,,
even in the sand that was washed away,,
these words will always show,,
the winds that blow ,,
will never blow away these words,,
written in time for those who knows,,
words of wisdom is the greatest gift,,
as friends are in life,,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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Re: friends in life
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:56:29 AM AEST
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Craig another beautiful write,as always from you! Loved this! Friend in Words!
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Re: friends in life
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:06:04 PM AEST
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very lovely, your opening paragraph is devine:
"sadness follows as the journey begins,,
gray clouds race across the skies,,,
picture perfect , of the way it was before,,
the last leaf drops as the winds subsides,,"
hugs nessa |
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Re: friends in life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:10:24 PM AEST
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it is so true that friends are the greatest gift.....we shall not forget them easily...even as the winds blow the sands of time...
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