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Want
Contributed by
lilykipling
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Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 02:16:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Two souls
Worlds apart
Intertwining desires
Capturing the moment.
Loneliness fades
As we reach euphoria.
A moment of lust.
I lie awake listening,
Listening to every breath you take.
Deep in thought
Reality sweeping over me
Hopes diminished.
It can never be.
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Re: Want
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by andrewjones12 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 06:36:39 AM AEST
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wanting to stop wanting?
-oxymorons.
nice write.
-andrew |
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Re: Want
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:49:37 AM AEST
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| yes, this is a nice write, well done. more please. |
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