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Balance
Contributed by
patti
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 04:45:22 PM in AEST
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solace is at it's best when tranquility is at peace
we create our own minds and our own pleasures, once we value our own self-portraits
do we not know what solace is?
we underestimate ourselves everyday trying to create our own peace of tranquility
yet, we forget the values of our self-portraits which have been created for us
we forget the value of what it is to exist, to live, to love, to be alive
we underestimate our kind so much, we forget what it is to be kind
we only see what is shown through our eyes but once closed, our world is filled with the unseen
the behind the scenes of what we see to exist
our solace, our tranquility, our pleasures, created in one
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Re: Balance
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 04:24:34 AM AEST (User
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I rather like this, seems very peaceful,
thanks for posting. |
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