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So Much Feeling
Contributed by
voyage
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 03:40:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You give me so much
And the best feeling yet
Life's most prescious moments
I could never forget
If my smile, bliss, desire
Is the least I return
I will bring you much higher,
Make your loving heart burn.
We don't know what will be
Or what we're ought to do
Love is all we got now
Only thing that holds true
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voyage
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2010-07-20 15:40:42]
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Re: So Much Feeling
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 05:53:10 PM AEST
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How very romantic, and loving, and true!
I'm so happy for you, you've found someone to love, and return it to you!
You are very fortunate.
I would like very much to comment on all of your poetry voyage, but I can't read your language! You do wonderfully well with English. Good for you!
and Welcome to YPDC. We are so happy that you have joined us. Welcome aboard!
We'll love your poetry
Warm love
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Re: So Much Feeling
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by Lionheart89 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 06:27:22 PM AEST
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| Nicely done, the words elegantly flow throughout your poem. :) |
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Re: So Much Feeling
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by andrewjones12 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:45:46 AM AEST
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very nice, it put a smile on my face=)
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