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The Doused Flame
Contributed by
zeberdee
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 10:54:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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innocent souls meeting in the classroom
we share laughs in the impending doom
our eyes meet and I grab you in desire
but I burn my fingers in the fire
the awful sound we heard that night
the noice that deafened the phones that rang
you fell to the sound of a bang
the only one who knew how to ignite
Today I sit and look to the window
I See a rainy gray sky pouring down on people below
Wet shadows walking around in a maze
Wishing you were here to set my world ablaze
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zeberdee
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2010-07-20 10:54:33]
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Re: The Doused Flame
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by NathanPaul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 01:36:09 PM AEST
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| One with a certian mind could only see the worrld in this way. Good job. |
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Re: The Doused Flame
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by MissTeenSuicide on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 03:47:51 AM AEST
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Nice imagery,
I like it ^^ |
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Re: The Doused Flame
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 05:14:06 AM AEST
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| i like it i hate the rain and the floods |
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Re: The Doused Flame
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by omarzz on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 12:46:27 AM AEST
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| Good emotional flow for certain |
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