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ONE LIFE TO SAVE
Contributed by
M-LOU
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 09:14:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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ONE LIFE TO SAVE
Why medical school in the first place??
You looked ahead,
Too far to go.
Too much,
Too fast,
Felt unworthy of the task.
Now you are in it.
What to do?
Trudge ahead,
Turn back now?
Clear the confusion from your head.
Mental fatigue,
Tired heart,
High expectations,
Demands reign!
“Remember the days of your youth.”
Stop!
Listen!
No, really listen!
Release!
Submit!
Continue your way.
You are not alone.
“I” am with you.
You are the one.
There is ONE LIFE for you to save.
You were faithful.
You followed the plan.
You listened,
You cared,
You did what I asked!
ONE LIFE FOR YOU TO SAVE.
Prophetic refrain.
Could it have happened?
Is the task fulfilled?
Indeed…..
The life was YOURS, my son.
Copyright ©
M-LOU
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2010-07-20 09:14:39]
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Re: ONE LIFE TO SAVE
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 11:59:24 AM AEST
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A story behind the poetry. This one I like. Nice ending and all the best to your son.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: ONE LIFE TO SAVE
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by jordanarce17 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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| i love it. hope you write more. god bless your son |
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