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losers.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 08:33:42 AM in AEST
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losing is losing.
Winning is winning.
But in the end my head is still spinning.
Where else to turn?
What else to think?
When a typical give up is a critical brink.
Ending an endless gory battle.
Between to minds that are always on the same level.
No one can win
Because there both losing.
So who would win?
When they are both choosing to win at
Losing.
-losers.
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Re: losers.
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 11:49:40 PM AEST
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Sounds like a married couple arguing...both stubborn and yet in trying to win,yes they are each losing.
Neat write :)
Blessings
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Re: losers.
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by MissTeenSuicide on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 04:16:47 AM AEST
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Wow this is a very original piece!
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