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Thankyou God
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 07:44:32 AM in AEST
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Existing in unrelenting self pity and grief
Lost, destroyed, belittled, in search of relief
No avenues my way, no help, no luck
Single lanes with one motive, I am stuck
Pointless to seek, falling, the pit is deep
Darkness sets upon me I am unable to sleep
With restless eyes I gaze upon the sunset red
Coolness of night approaches I wipe the sweat from my head
A hard day under the sun, upon me the smell of land
The evening light a fading red and still there I stand
The marvel of it, remaining still, no thoughts I stare
The remnants of my past flash before me, I begin to dare.
Tuesday, 20 July 2010
1:43:04 PM
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Re: Thankyou God
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by andrewjones12 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 08:13:40 AM AEST
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| great job! i loved it. |
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Re: Thankyou God
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 09:32:58 AM AEST
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Awesome write, my friend.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Thankyou God
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:28:26 AM AEST
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Within me I debated the Title
"Thankyou God" or "On The Precipice"
In hind sight I am leaning to "On The Precipice" |
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