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i don't even know me
Contributed by
rumplestiltskin
on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 01:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i feel like running to nowhere .. i feel like vanishing to ashes and fly all over the air ..
all over the cold places i was placed .. all over the bold traces it left ..
i feel like another me came to life from within ..
another entity trapped inside the same skin ..
holding the same sins .. the same thoughts, the same end ..
like i was born on a sinking ship .. i lose my grip .. fall and slip ..
no matter how hard i try to take the step .. the higher that i get the tougher ..
the more weak i become .. the more changes within me still to come ..
i guess it's too late for the wake up, too late for the make up ..
i don't know much about life but i know i was never up ..
always feeling down, with a fake smile of a clown ..
with a million tears driving me the way down to drown ..
i miss the old me, i miss happiness, i hate agony ..
my life is full of "if only"s .. if only i got to choose, i'd choose to be lonely ..
no one but me and i only ..
my heart is aching i'm screaming for someone to hold me ..
gather the shattered pieces of my broken blood pump that's gloomy..
stick them together with love, pump life through me ..
so i can be me the way i once knew me ..
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rumplestiltskin
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2010-07-19 13:25:21]
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Re: i don't even know me
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 03:16:11 PM AEST
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I can honestly say that at times I have felt this way.
Still today,I would like to know where "me" went and can I ever really get her back.
But life changes us as we turn new pages of each chapter.
A very emotional and well expressed piece.
Blessings
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Re: i don't even know me
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 06:48:54 AM AEST
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| this is very well set out but it has a certain sadness. Sad though this is, it really does something for me. very well done. |
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Re: i don't even know me
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by Pat346 on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 09:48:30 AM AEST
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| Sad but well written. I like it. Thank you! |
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Re: i don't even know me
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by Holly573 on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 06:51:44 PM AEST
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| its sad that how true this can be, amazing. |
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