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She loves...him...
Contributed by
kd7cnz
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Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 08:41:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All my words are lies.
what is the truth?
my heart is the only one that knows.
I tell her that I approve and to be happy,
my heart screams in pain at my words.
I jab the knife into my soul;
what does my pain matter?
she loves him,
that is all that is important now.
I am just the guy she knows,
I am just someone else...
what role do I get to play in this "loves tragedy"
am I the jester and the fool?
do my feeling matter?
if so to whom?
I love her with all that is in me,
but the world is against us.
our love would be thought so wrong,
but I do not care.
all I want is her to be happy,
I would die to give her that.
she deserves the best,
but she settles for him.
he is a nice and safe guy to be sure,
I do not think that he would bring her harm.
but there is so much more to the man that she should give her love,
so much more to her prince.
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Re: She loves...him...
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 12:32:34 PM AEST
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This is a little sad. Tell her how you feel and see what she says. You never know, she may have chosen someone else because she's waited for you to say something but it never came.
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Re: She loves...him...
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by ammar on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 11:42:31 AM AEST
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You are not alone in this; it happens with so many people. Well, I don't know exactly how you ought to deal with this, but you must do something. Don't let it continue like it is.
A good write. I like fourth stanza the best.
Peace
Ammar |
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