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Downhill
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 10:26:03 PM in AEST
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There was a time when I believed in the world, I would rave and persist the government was pure,
but then I woke up and I opened my eyes and to begin to realize all the teachings were lies,
and now I sit in disgust with my ignorant past and i know that my life is deteriorating fast.
I gues thats ok because we all die and no one will make truth from histories lies.
So i will grow old and work life away and become more worried and withered with every passing day,
then my mind will fade and ill lose it all, ive completed the climb and am beginning to fall.
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Re: Downhill
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 11:33:16 PM AEST
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Yes we are dying,from the very first moment we take a breath.
Making it to the downhill part is a mission lol..surely its a neat downhill slide from there *smiles*
Not sure what it is about this piece that I like...probably the reality of your words.
Thought provoking indeed!
Blessings
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Re: Downhill
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by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:49:13 AM AEST
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this one caught me, i realy enjoyed your write.
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