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This New Journey

Contributed by lovingwhispers on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 08:18:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Great Spirit
You drape the sunshine across the shoulders of this man before me
To stand strong in colours that show me the seasons of his heartbeat
His breath,but the wind carried from the soul you've long danced through
Great Spirit
What for,must our eyes meet

I have journeyed far within,taken the red path to find my meaning,reflection
Love has come in shadows,guarded by mistrust and hollow conceptions
You have stood by him in battles and still set him far from where I can touch
Great Spirit
What for,must our days be of us

We can only dream the yellow grass to be where we roam and feel the earth
Under same moon and yet the dance be for one
Always his half night in my evenings ambered birth
Great Spirit
What for,must this river run

Mother Earth holds me as the tears fall from blue velvet
For you will not speak,until I am of clear mind
Cleansed and nurtured,ready to be guided
Great Spirit
What for,must I walk to him blind

It is true,I will listen with my colours ablaze
I am your daughter and carry the pride of long ago
Speak to me of this journey Great Spirit
Please
What for,must I love him so

Copyright © lovingwhispers ... [ 2010-07-18 20:18:05]
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Re: This New Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 09:23:39 PM AEST
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Well hi there,
It's good to see a post from you.
This is really great writing.
Blessings,
emy

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