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Her Suffering Was Romantic(to her)
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 08:12:53 PM in AEST
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The debris from the carnal wreckage
lies scattered upon floor and sheets
Misery moans,a deep guttural sound
Her mistress,the keeper...
depletes
Utter madness is,and will evermore
Be the tune to which she will dance
No longer a choice,more now the demise
And this be her final...
romance
Lifeless in thought,abandoned emotion
Strung up on the threads of her smile
Dirty washing is now,where fantasies played
And all can see her...
denial
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
... [
2010-07-18 20:12:53]
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Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic(to her)
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by Nirvana12 on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 10:35:10 PM AEST
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| very good poem. sad and well written, liked the way it was spaced. |
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Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic(to her)
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by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 08:09:17 AM AEST
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i have to tell you this realy touched me, i felt your sorrow so strongly.
i love your writting.
-andrew. |
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Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic(to her)
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by voyage on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 03:49:20 PM AEST
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| so strong and touching. |
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Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic(to her)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 03:28:45 AM AEST
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| Again you are an excellent poet, could you tell me though what this poem is about. I have an inclination but perhaps I'm wrong pm me of necessary |
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Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic(to her)
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by xnickix7 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 08:05:00 PM AEST
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| an interesting write....i like |
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