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kaizen
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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words trickle down
from a wound
I have no intention of healing
that stretches like a tight-rope
between creativity & madness. . .
in its shadow. . . I first
embrace sadness & imperfection
dormant idiosyncrasies
preferenced neurosis
addictive blemishes
uninhibited corners
defensive quirks
reacton time. . .
encounter bewilderment of the elements
earth~water~fire~air~ether~union
brave countlesss untitled flames
& insufferable distractions
still. . .
my ink bleeds to sing
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-07-18 17:15:10]
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Re: kaizen
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by slay797 on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 11:29:10 PM AEST
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| the process of self development - - this poem is great is it about tattoos? |
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Re: kaizen
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by venkat on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:23:34 AM AEST
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| Dearest poetess, Trickling words of blood have turned into brave countless untitled flames.. Aaah..go on writing more. :-) venkat |
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Re: kaizen
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:50:15 AM AEST
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| lovely poem this, well writen, the words sing out from the page. |
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Re: kaizen
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 09:06:31 AM AEST
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Perhaps the poet has no intention of healing the wound because it makes for great poetry, eh? And great poerty is definitely your forte.  |
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Re: kaizen
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 11:47:14 PM AEST
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"my ink bleeds to sing"
i love this line! very well written, nice job! :) |
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Re: kaizen
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 07:29:46 AM AEST
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well writtin! i enjoyed this very much.
-andrew |
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Re: kaizen
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by ming on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:52:22 PM AEST
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I agree with the rest of your fans!! Miss you and GREAT read.
'my ink bleeds to sing'
Love love love these words.
ming |
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Re: kaizen
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 03:03:01 PM AEST
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That last line is a killer.
Your words are relentless and filled with shadows; beautiful and ripe with emotion. What lovely imagery... It takes a strong heart to embrace darkness, especially one's own. A reflective piece that provokes the soul to look in the mirror. Excellent read, I thank you for sharing it with us. *smiles*
~S.
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