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Chase
Contributed by
Spike
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Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:43:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I’ll catch it in the corner of an
eye borne by a hunter
in the grasp of a musician
trembling strings for his tuition
and I’ll lay it in the meadow where
the flowers weave a halo for
my lover who now conquered
smiles sweetly in release.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2010-07-18 05:43:16]
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Re: Chase
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 06:41:53 AM AEST
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| these words are lovely, a very well writen poem, i look forward to more. |
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Re: Chase
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 07:33:40 PM AEST
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I love this poem and the way it connects ideas together and creates a perfect ending.
Heidi |
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Re: Chase
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 08:26:38 PM AEST
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Simplistic Beauty!!!
In just a few words,you have captured deep emotions and beautiful images.
Wonderful!
Blessings
LW |
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Re: Chase
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 07:51:48 AM AEST
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Spike! Good to see you are still doing your thing.
For so few words the impact was huge and the imagery and warm emotion- vivid!
This is beautiful. Truly.
~Scorp. |
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