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A city
Contributed by
antikythera
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Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 04:54:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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What delicate lands -
the universe is filled with such stuff as
candles for the fragrance of strawberrys and the smothered diamond.
But I look at the lake and see
nothing but that writing of ripples
within the dull shades of transparent anger of the torrent.
Lands full of calculating roosters and neon jugulars
from bitter consequences and obscene granules.
Ah, the hidden dignity of the light !
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antikythera
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2010-07-18 04:54:50]
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Re: A city
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 07:52:54 PM AEST
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I like this!
Its like it is straight from the pages of a mystical story,filled with delightful colours and wonderful landscapes.
"candles for the fragrance of strawberrys and the smothered diamond"
LOVE this line!
Blessings and thank you for your kind comments
LW
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Re: A city
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by RAJNANDY on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 05:54:49 AM AEST
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A VERY UNIQUE AND ORIGINAL COMPOSITION !
-Raj |
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Re: A city
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 04:50:27 PM AEST
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from bitter consequences and obscene granules ..
love it, shows alot of talent with words, keep it up :) |
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