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I don't know why I die the way I do
Contributed by
DAISHI
on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 02:34:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I keep looking at your eyes
And hoping you see in mine what I see in yours
I die for not for your voice
Not for the tone or the inclination
Not for ascension or decline
I die for your thoughts
For your suffering and your victory
I die to be wrapped up in your moment
And shedding tears with your tears
To laugh in your laughter
I die to share a day with you
I have no science or miracles
No Darwin or God
Just the day and the night to think on you
And not know why I think the way I think
And tear my myself like paper into undistinguished pieces
Scattered on floors
Each piece reflecting what you are to me
I don't know why I suffer like I do
Thinking on thoughts of you
I just want to be
A memory in your day
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Re: I don't know why I die the way I do
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 03:27:05 AM AEST
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| Strong passionate and questioning from the depths of a very loving heart and that is the reason why, the more capable a heart is of loving the more unfortunately it is of dying when deprived of the love it seeks. well written |
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Re: I don't know why I die the way I do
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 12:16:27 AM AEST
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we all were in this situation once, some choose to move on, some have the courage to continue on ..
very well written and meaningful :) |
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