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Fallen Angels
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 11:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I could see for endless miles and I heard freedom's cries
I caught a glimpse of home as you held me with your eyes
You lifted me beyond the night,heaven didn't seem that far
The night this fallen angel found her wings among the stars
Attached and fused in flesh,I was bound by love's sweet ties
Captured in a moments touch,I shed layers of my disguise
Wrapped up in reality where truth of heart and soul resides
The night this fallen angel found her wings deep down inside
A symphony of sensual,the string section of my desires
Filled empty hallways of lost dreams and how they did inspire
Everything and anything as I floated upon your song
The night this fallen angel found a place she could belong
Lovers in their faraway places,awoke and heard the distant sighs
Of two who whispered into each,"I've been waiting all my life"
Poetic in flawless motion,a rhythmic dance of unspoken words
The night two fallen angels,found each other here on earth
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 03:17:11 AM AEST
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| That was beautiful |
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 03:47:16 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. Nicely written. |
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 04:48:10 AM AEST
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| i like this, the words flow with ease, great read :) |
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 09:35:21 AM AEST
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Dear LW
BRAVO!BRAVO! BRAVO! DEAR LW Roses at your feet. Remember who used to say that all the time?. I miss him don't you?
Your words are timeless, you are still the enchanting, interesting, and mysterious poet I've always enjoyed! You never fail to amaze me with your analogy, and your timing is always perfect!
Love your poetry dear!
Warm love
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 10:24:09 AM AEST
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A beautiful Write, just beautiful.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 10:53:35 PM AEST
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Tossing Daisies at you sweety! This is moving it reached right into my heart and made it sing.
Michelle |
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Re: Fallen Angels
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by Lionheart89 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 05:11:43 PM AEST
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| wow... *speechless* no words for it. |
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