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The truth of love.
Contributed by
The_Writing_Master
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 09:14:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love.
It can be strong.
It can be weak.
Love.
It can overcome barriers.
It can overcome distances.
It can overcome death itself.
Love
It is what some have.
It is what others envy.
It is what keeps some alive.
Love.
It is often abused.
Relationships ruined by petty lies.
To have loved and to have lost
brings about another feeling.
Sadness.
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Re: The truth of love.
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by rogergouldnc on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 09:37:21 PM AEST
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Nice write,,,,
Love is fickle
Love is what you desire
aspire to
inquire of
resent
and prevent yourself from fully comprehending..
as we all do
God bless...
check my wiites..
perhaps some of my pain can become your gain..
Take care and don't stop writing like I did |
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Re: The truth of love.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 03:31:26 AM AEST
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this is indeed a very deep piece of writing
but for me easy to understand. very well writen, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The truth of love.
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:02:22 AM AEST
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| The last line is good...you have a lot of cliches in this poem. You should take a cliche and turn it on it's head! |
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Re: The truth of love.
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by gypsydancer69 on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 01:08:03 PM AEST
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| awe love to be without u feel like dieing , i do miss it so , keep up the good work ;)~ |
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Re: The truth of love.
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by Skezza on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:22:50 PM AEST
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| This is a great piece. I really enjoyed reading it and the emotions i felt with it also :) |
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Re: The truth of love.
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by kadie on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 12:00:13 PM AEST
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that was real good .
i real liked it.
i can't pick want i liked most
about your poem.
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