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treatment.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:58:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Stuck on an island with bipolar drenched personalities.
The soundtrack of mentally ill maniacs giving orders, and yelling because there is so much yelling.
Feeling and functioning
But feeling because we’re functioning.
Dropping slips, but don’t we slip before we drop?
There’s never anything to do,
But we are always doing something.
Can’t go for a walk because they’ll think you’re running.
So tell me why we’re here, scoliosis, hemorrhoids, migraines, or is it because cold steel bars are what we really
fear?
-rehab.
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Re: treatment.
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by Sushila on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 07:17:24 AM AEST
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Amazing how such an experience can be put into poetic words! The truth stares at you but the cirumstances portray a pathetic scene.
Truly well written to capture the situation as it is.
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Re: treatment.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 01:26:20 AM AEST
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| very well writen, the words expose many deep thoughts and flow nicely across the mind. well done. |
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Re: treatment.
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by misstee on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 09:56:54 AM AEST
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| i felt every word as i read this.. great job! |
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Re: treatment.
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by NicoleMichelle on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 09:12:29 PM AEST
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| very true. i love how you put it, and you can tell that you put great thought into it. |
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