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love
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kjones
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 05:55:26 AM in AEST
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i preach about the hate and i feel i can relate to the hate and the race we dont accept what we cant see and we dont love what we cant be so we dream what we wanna dream and we past our blind beliefes on to our kids and they carry it to the streets and the pack the heat ready to kill ready to die for the wrong reasons why cant we just see the right in us why cant we feel the love from above and pass on to those we need to touch.
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Re: love
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:26:57 AM AEST
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| i like this very much, well writen, well done. |
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Re: love
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:47:15 AM AEST
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| again, nice write. |
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Re: love
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 03:20:54 AM AEST
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| Amen |
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Re: love
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:55:23 AM AEST
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even without a conventional poetic structure, this proved to be very poignant. sadly, times are changing for the worse and u remind us of the good that is fading, or of what's left of it... i enjoyed this write alot.
take care
K.Z. |
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Re: love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 02:28:40 AM AEST
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| like the part about passing blind beliefs onto our children but you might wanna review the spelling. I like the poem though |
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